Face to Face in
by Constance Brewer
I wander Via Flaminia,
weave my way deep into
the guts of Bella Roma,
turn at random until I leave
this idle March behind.
Citizens vanish, fading two
by one until I am alone
on a narrow-cobble street
receding into ancient alley.
I stretch my hands apart
as if crucified, brush white-
washed stone left and right,
trail my fingers over
the persistence of centuries.
A final turn. The path dead
ends. Grimy brick towers
over head high enough
to enforce my insignificance.
Before me, in the center
of the oft-mortared wall,
three bullet holes.
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14 comments:
That's beautiful. It really evokes an image of Rome.
Thanks Gabriele. :)
Strong imagery, and I like the sort of turn the introduction of the bullet holes image gives at the end.
I recently discovered your blog through the WyoPoets site. I am henceforth a follower.
-Bret N.
awakenwyoming.org
Bret - thank you! Nice to know someone is reading. And reading WyoPoets too - which is about due for an overhaul...
This poem will be features at PWB. Please stop by and support the other poets featured in september's collection
Awesome. Thank you!
PWB - Poets Who Blog. Drop by and visit. :)
Excellent. I rather like the "idle March" line.
This is a poem that transports me to another place. Lovely!
This poem is part of the PWB September Collection. It would be great if you could visit the other blogs in the collection and comment.
This was fantastic. Here is my favorite part:
I stretch my hands apart
as if crucified, brush white-
washed stone left and right,
trail my fingers over
the persistence of centuries.
Carla, thanks. One for the Romanophiles. *g*
sara - thanks.
I will be when I have enough time this week to do them justice. :)
c. elizabeth. - Thank you! Don't know if I could live in such close quarters again after being out here in the wide open Western US.
I love the whole thing! Just wonderful - evoking imagery of Rome with cliche!
Thank you for sharing it with us!
A vivid and lyrical evocation of time and place. Congratulations for making part of The September Collection at Poets Who Blog
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