12 July 2007

Poetry Thursday 7/12

A very short poem for Poetry Thursday. Can't tell I've been playing with haiku of late, can you?


Waterfalls

Liquid
forms,
water
wells,
voices
cross,
tear
drops
swell.

The
point
between
gather
and
fall
a
heart
........beat.

10 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

It works well...

Clare said...

This is exquisite and so very beautiful! I love it!

Constance said...

Thanks. :)

I'm bouncing between sparse poems and epics of late. Looking for the happy medium.

tumblewords said...

Partial to sparse, I love this!

Constance said...

tumblewords - Thanks. I'm usually quite verbose, so all the white space is a bit frightening! :)

Michelle said...

Very nice -- lovely effect of form on the page and your subject.

...deb said...

Perfect form and voice.

Constance said...

Michelle and Deb - Thank you. :)

Rob Kistner said...

Excellent! I enjoyed this piece… ;)

I do a lot of single-word single-line poetry -- I love the form and its power!

Constance said...

Rob, I'll have to come visit. :) Single word/line poems are something fun to play with.