I think so - I like that fine wire image. Life is sticky that way! Your quote of the day is fine, too!
Mmmmm - a compelling image and question. And a universal one, too, I think. I like poetry that touches on those universal questions.Thank you!Hugs,Hedwyg
Were you born with safety glass,or without,that is the question.
Pauline - The voices help me write. :)Hedwyg - Thanks! Universal questions provide tons of fodder for poetry...
Anon - Only thing I know for sure, it that I was born with a pesky brother.
The final three lines are perfect - as is the poem, itself. Enjoyed it!
Thanks, tumblewords, glad you liked it. :)
Interesting answer to a cleverly posed question. I like your poem.
...deb - thanks, glad you liked it
I think there's maybe a question about whether the fine wire will hold for long enough to allow healing or will it itself then collapse. Very thought provoking poem.
crafty green poet- That's pretty much the question, isn't it. :)Never know where an article on windshield technology wil lead you...
love your imagery! not sure about the answer myself.
odessa - thanks. That's the fun of being disorganized! :)
'Fate is sticky that way'. A great closer!
a nice image, aren't all our lives a bit fractured and wired together as you imagine?
dick jones - thanks!sage, I don't know about every one elses lives, but mine sure is. :)
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